Creative Writing Thread

[hypnotoadtrance]

CREATIVE WRITING



Poetry, essays, short stories, biographies; If you can write it, post it.

Rules:

1. Anything goes. You can be as serious or playful as you want with what you post.
2. However, if you wish to post content which may not be suitable for minors (ei; sex stories, intensely grotesque material, etc...), you must place some sort of content warning at the top of the post. Even then, if the post fails to adhere to Xfire's forum rules, it may be deleted. So use caution.
3. You needn't be a master of English in order to participate. If you can get your point across, then everything should be fine.
4. Don't discourage others from posting by bashing their mistakes. If someone is making mistakes, you can inform them, but don't troll them for it.
5. I bet 90% of you didn't even read these rules.
6. Constructive criticism of work is permitted so long as the individual being criticized is open to it.
7. Avoid making multiple posts for one piece of work. If your work is too long to fit inside a post, you are encouraged to provide the first paragraph of the work, then place a link to the full work for those who are interested in reading further.
8. Even if you have nothing to contribute to the thread, feel free to comment on other user's work.
9. No other rules come to mind at this moment, so just use common sense (if you have any trolololol).

[hypnotoadtrance]

I'll start things off with my little story, The Cold Blue Deep, which I was required to write during my Highschool Senior year.

I started off well with it, but toward the end of the story, I was running short on time, so I had to quickly throw in an ending or risk turning in an incomplete story. So yes, I already know the ending sucks. lol.

Enjoy.


Warning: 16,100 characters. Can you handle it?

The Cold Blue Deep By: James Jackson

With the advent of faster-than-light (FTL) travel, space exploration had become a realization. The technology sprouted many pioneers willing to search the stars for earth-like planets. Allan was your typical space-pioneer. He was born and raised at Rikovschki Space Station in orbit around Mars. His parents were among the first to colonize the station, and had helped expand the station’s districts by more than three hundred kilometers. The station was like a blanket in orbit around Mars. On some days, you could see the shadow of the station on the clouds of Mars. Allan had been partnering up with other pioneers and had built up a large team of forty-nine. With direct approval of the counsel, he had chartered a space ship to take his team to survey Europa for microorganisms living in the ice, and to prospect possible terraforming operations. [Read more..]

[f1lm]

Sounds interesting, but anything I could contribute would number in the hundreds of pages and likely be better presented as a wiki than a story. So I'm just going to sit back for a while.

[hypnotoadtrance]

Sounds interesting, but anything I could contribute would number in the hundreds of pages and likely be better presented as a wiki than a story. So I'm just going to sit back for a while.

Can haz taste?

[aliceblair]

Sounds interesting, but anything I could contribute would number in the hundreds of pages and likely be better presented as a wiki than a story. So I'm just going to sit back for a while.

This pretty much.

[ausaosin]

There once was a little boy. He had a passion for turtles. He died.

edit to fix all my typossss!11

[sjja3]

I used to use my xfire blog for this kind of thing. My writings are still there.

[smallwood2000]

There once was a little Dutch boy. He was once walking along when he saw a leaky dyke. He stuck his fingure into the hole of this leaky Dyke. He stayed there all night long with his fingure firmley wedged into this big leaky dyke. In the morning the town's village people awoke to find this little boy dead with his fingure inside a dyke.

Hangon, thats a true story ? wtf...

http://www.pantheon.org/articles/l/l...dutch_boy.html

seriously dutch ppl.

[hypnotoadtrance]

There once was a little Dutch boy. He was once walking along when he saw a leaky dyke. He stuck his fingure into the hole of this leaky Dyke. He stayed there all night long with his fingure firmley wedged into this big leaky dyke. In the morning the town's village people awoke to find this little boy dead with his fingure inside a dyke.

Hangon, thats a true story ? wtf...

http://www.pantheon.org/articles/l/l...dutch_boy.html

seriously dutch ppl.

So if someone tells you to go stick your finger in a dyke, they're actually asking you to perform an act of heroism. Interesting.

[aliceblair]

I put a faggot in a dyke once, true story, I was like 6 or something at the time.

[deathtoall2]

Sounds interesting, but anything I could contribute would number in the hundreds of pages and likely be better presented as a wiki than a story. So I'm just going to sit back for a while.

[shiva1001]

Long time ago, up to ten years ago rising from the ground came a cow. Not an ordinary cow, but this cow was known as 'Captain Cak Cow'. One of the most greatest, bravest Cow in the world. For his brain had been scientifically replaced by an alien's brain which had been found in Antarctica. Even though he didn't speak he would dig super fast and help those in need by springing underground to those who call him.

But there was one man, Peter Piper Parker, who was jealous of Captain Cak Cow's alien brain for he should have been given the brain after paying the government $10 million, but he was so dumb he didn't receive a receipt of the purchase and after paying the government. Meanwhile the government had other ideas to help humanity by giving it to a cow to help the world from its troubles.

Peter Piper Parker had no proof that the brain should be given to him and he had lost his money. Peter Piper Parker is now a broke man who thinks he had deserved the brain, which was meant to be heavily modified to make him smarter and be able to build the most destructive weapons, which could have been able to give him the leadership role by threatening the existence of the whole World. Only problem was he wasn't as smart as the Cow but always tried to capture him and take the brain.

To this day he still tries to capture him but is dramatically failing, and Captain Cak Cow is still a hero to humanity saving lives each day. Spending most of his time in a secret farm, undercover as an ordinary cow, eating grass and pooping.

Just made it all up in 10 minutes. I hate creative writing. I think its good but others always think its crap, even the dumb **** teachers who cant teach me english and writing and grammar properly.!

[shiva1001]

woops double post my bad

[duncreek]

I'll have to contribute at some point. Not sure what to do at the moment, but it's four in the morning and I'm ****ing tired. You bitches can wait.

[qwertyuiop15]

Once upon a time, I wrote a crappy story. The end.

[felixleonhart]

Shortest story. End.

[sourtrippin]

yo yo mic check 1, 2 uhhmmmmm 12?
there once was a creative writing thread
scrilla thought, this is my chance for dat bread
so he threw down almost left his audience dead
soon as he step out they be sayin, omg its not him!
cuz he be buckin queers like deers so all yall fags better clear
that means u greenwitch always comin off like a bitch
or my homie duncreek always got somethin to preach
cant leave out alice, dat bitch be filled with malice
benny always gettin killed like that dude kenny
now im talkin hypno, that dude be the ****n tits yo
so this is a lil shoutout for all my homies in the outhouse
if u didnt get mentioned, that means i dont give a **** bout
but im kiddin, with this whole thing i might be fibbin
don't take this lil diddy for my skills
this is just a drunk freestyle so come on n get ya fills
scrilla be the only black guy on this forum willin to get a deal
roadbloc ya finna get shot while u post when im fillin out this plot
and this is just about the end so imma refill this pen
yo scrilla be right back at it like a pack full of crack addicts
you'd have to be as drunk as me to get all this madness
but on the reals, i love yall like a fat dude loves his meals
some of yall i wouldnt even mind to meet, you know who u be
this is my creative writing entry, now who's gonna try n step up n test me


i wanna give a shoutout to all u fags on the virtual interstate, keep it real

[greenwitch]

I approve this thread.

[felixleonhart]

yo yo mic check 1, 2 uhhmmmmm 12?
there once was a creative writing thread
scrilla thought, this is my chance for dat bread
so he threw down almost left his audience dead
soon as he step out they be sayin, omg its not him!
cuz he be buckin queers like deers so all yall fags better clear
that means u greenwitch always comin off like a bitch
or my homie duncreek always got somethin to preach
cant leave out alice, dat bitch be filled with malice
benny always gettin killed like that dude kenny
now im talkin hypno, that dude be the ****n tits yo
so this is a lil shoutout for all my homies in the outhouse
if u didnt get mentioned, that means i dont give a **** bout
but im kiddin, with this whole thing i might be fibbin
don't take this lil diddy for my skills
this is just a drunk freestyle so come on n get ya fills
scrilla be the only black guy on this forum willin to get a deal
roadbloc ya finna get shot while u post when im fillin out this plot
and this is just about the end so imma refill this pen
yo scrilla be right back at it like a pack full of crack addicts
you'd have to be as drunk as me to get all this madness
but on the reals, i love yall like a fat dude loves his meals
some of yall i wouldnt even mind to meet, you know who u be
this is my creative writing entry, now who's gonna try n step up n test me


i wanna give a shoutout to all u fags on the virtual interstate, keep it real

Lol XD

[hypnotoadtrance]

yo yo mic check 1, 2 uhhmmmmm 12?
there once was a creative writing thread
scrilla thought, this is my chance for dat bread
so he threw down almost left his audience dead
soon as he step out they be sayin, omg its not him!
cuz he be buckin queers like deers so all yall fags better clear
that means u greenwitch always comin off like a bitch
or my homie duncreek always got somethin to preach
cant leave out alice, dat bitch be filled with malice
benny always gettin killed like that dude kenny
now im talkin hypno, that dude be the ****n tits yo
so this is a lil shoutout for all my homies in the outhouse
if u didnt get mentioned, that means i dont give a **** bout
but im kiddin, with this whole thing i might be fibbin
don't take this lil diddy for my skills
this is just a drunk freestyle so come on n get ya fills
scrilla be the only black guy on this forum willin to get a deal
roadbloc ya finna get shot while u post when im fillin out this plot
and this is just about the end so imma refill this pen
yo scrilla be right back at it like a pack full of crack addicts
you'd have to be as drunk as me to get all this madness
but on the reals, i love yall like a fat dude loves his meals
some of yall i wouldnt even mind to meet, you know who u be
this is my creative writing entry, now who's gonna try n step up n test me


i wanna give a shoutout to all u fags on the virtual interstate, keep it real

:O

I never could get the hang of rhyming. Nice job!